To the Randolph School class of 2216,
I’m writing to you in hopes that
you will find some knowledge and guidance in what
we know in the year 2016 in regards to climate change and the global
perspectives on the topic. I have spent
a week conducting brief research on the topic, and my letter to you is composed
of my findings.
As of today, it is a fact that
climate change is happening. According to NASA (1), Global temperatures have risen by approximately
1 degree in the past century, sea levels are rising and various natural disasters are
occurring and damaging many parts of the earth. However, many people don’t
believe that it is happening and there is no need for concern, and I find it to
be extremely troublesome.
I studied the beliefs of my
classmates, and found a quiz (2) that compares my views about climate change to
those of other countries around the world. People of 40 nations around the
world on their perspectives of climate change, and when ranked against other
countries, I scored 6th, meaning that my concern is greater than
that of 85% of the countries polled. Scrolling through the results, I found
that the United States is ranked 37th of the 40 countries and my own
results. 37/41 is an absolutely horrifying statistic to me, especially because
of the fact that as a nation, we produce on of the highest levels of greenhouse
gas emissions. You would think that it’d make the United States care more, but
apparently not. Most countries around the world believe that the richest
countries should be the ones that put forth a greater effort, and a greater
budget towards trying to find solutions to the problems of climate change. I
completely agree, the countries that have more money, tend to emit green house
gasses, and yet these are the countries that appear to have greater rates of
climate doubt. Whereas countries that have less of a budget seem to have a
greater concern for the issue, South American countries in particular have the
lead in concern for climate change. The greatest concern for all people around
the world is the possibility of drought or water shortage as one of many side
effects of global climate change.
After reading these shocking
statistics, I decided that I should compile my own data. I created a survey and
asked my classmates to respond. The website I used allowed me to view all of the
respondents answers on a graph for each individual question.
Figure 1
For the first question in my survey, I asked my peers the
question that I had found most shocking when compiling research on other
countries. I asked which countries they’d expect to have the highest level of
concern for change in the climate. Shockingly, over half of them guessed the
US, Russia, and China. When in fact, as you have already read, South American
countries are the ones with the highest level of concern.
Figure 2
Figure 2
The second question I asked was how soon they thought
climate change would make a drastic impact on life, well the fact was that it
is happening today, in 2016. I was surprised that more people didn’t believe
that it was happening now, But I was actually glad to see that there are people
who believe that climate change is an issue is going on in 2016.
Next, I asked for the level of concern my classmates had for
the matter, and the results were well dispersed and pretty evenly spaced, The
two most common levels of concern were 3 and 6 on a scale of 1-10. Which are
relatively moderate levels of concern. I would place myself in the 8-9 range on
a scale of 1-10.
Figure 4
The final question I posed to my classmates was if they thought that countries with more money and power should spend more money to fix the problems of climate change. Approximately 75% of my peers shared an opinion similar to that of many countries around the world.
1) NASA NASA stands for national aeronautics space administration and it is in charge of science and engineering having to do with space.
2) PEW research center is a research "think tank" based in Washington DC; founded by Andrew Kohut.
1) NASA NASA stands for national aeronautics space administration and it is in charge of science and engineering having to do with space.
2) PEW research center is a research "think tank" based in Washington DC; founded by Andrew Kohut.
I like the amount of statistics you have in the essay, it is very informative. It could be written a bit more like a letter however.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the graphs as they showed numbers backing up all your claims
ReplyDeletei really like how you made up your own survey to explain your point of view! this was really interesting to read and was worded out just as a letter!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I love that first sentence. Its completely serious but the fact that you bolded the word knowledge made me laugh. Second, your survey was awesome! I love that you included the results in the paper.
ReplyDeleteI like how you went further than what the websites said and found your own statistics! very creative!
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